Thursday 3 November 2011

More poems

I've just been reading through the poems from tonight's competition. And there are some truly brilliant ones. One of the best, that nearly won the competition (but not quite. Oh, so close!), was written by my zany, wacky, and fantastic nephew Tom. It's about an angry suitcase. Here goes...

The Angry Suitcase

There was once an angry suitcase
Who snapped and snapped all night
People kept on throwing him
Until his face went white
But one day it all began!
And then he had a plan!
An extremely evil plan!
He had himself fitted wheels
And snapped at people's heels
And then he gave brith
And now his son rules the earth!!!!!

Written by Tom



Another fantastic poem (and appropriate for this time of year), was from Maddie, who decided that making up words was her best chance of success. And how close she came to winning the whole thing! Hers is about fireworks...

Firework-alicious

Fireworks are Bangtastic
Vampires think Fangtastic
I think Fandabatastic
What do you think?


Written by Maddie



The entries were awesome! Well done everyone and keep writing. Here's to next year's competition!

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