After yesterday's poetry competition that I ran at the Wrenthorpe Methodist Church, here is the winning poem. I've also posted the poem that I chose for second place (I wasn't going to choose a second one, but it was such a close run thing that I felt it was only fair to). Thanks to Alice (my four year old) for her insightful comments on all the poems!
THE WINNING POEM...
Sweetys, sweetys as sweet as can be
Please buy a bag of sweetys for me.
A fruity one, a chocolatey one and marshallow too
It's a shame none of them are good for you!!!
By Aimee and Kacey
SECOND PLACE...
Bags are cool
Bags are great
Bags you can hold in any way
Girls bags
Man bags
Have an evening out bags
Purses and crossovers are lots of fun
Fashionable and girly
They make you glow in the sun
You need a bag every day
Every outfit
In every way.
By Alice (not my Alice, but the 9 year old Alice on the stall next to me yesterday!)
Well done to you girls, they were great poems! Keep writing, keep having fun.
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conrad i have got a poem for you to read.
Badsworth School
Badsworth school is fun
Badsworth school is amazing
Badsworth school is ace, ace ,ace
Im glad you came to stay
Badsworth school is the place to be im sure you will agree
From Chatterbox Ella
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